05-19-2013, 03:59 AM
(05-19-2013, 03:42 AM)Catcherin Wrote: Great poem. Like the message, love the ending. I really enjoyed the last two stanzas though the third is good as well. I think its important to carry out actions for reasons other than to earn (perceived) brownie pointsThank you. Although I'm not over pleased with the ending, I'm not sure if it isn't a bit soppy compared to the rest of the poem.
Matt x


