My last walk
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This is a brilliant poem. The simple descriptions of of people and there loved ones/day to day activities seem detached from the jumper. It seemed to me to stress all the simple fundamentals that they wouldn't/couldn't have, but then the second line of the 3rd stanza seems to denote some sort of regret? I loved the wording, its very relaxed, almost tranquil in its description of such a horrible event.
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My last walk - by Keith - 05-16-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 03:51 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Keith - 05-18-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 08:27 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by billy - 05-18-2013, 08:37 PM
RE: My last walk - by Keith - 05-21-2013, 07:44 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Catcherin - 05-19-2013, 02:38 AM



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