My last walk
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no line by from me, i did like the poem and i suppose from the last couplet i should have gotten it was a suicide but i didn't, i think what threw me was the abseil, (which is usually done with a rope) i enjoyed the triviality of it all which is probably how the suicide saw the world. the couplet is excellent given the context of the poem, i wonder if the title takes us too far away from the act
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My last walk - by Keith - 05-16-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 03:51 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Keith - 05-18-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 08:27 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by billy - 05-18-2013, 08:37 PM
RE: My last walk - by Keith - 05-21-2013, 07:44 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Catcherin - 05-19-2013, 02:38 AM



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