My last walk

[Magpie]

I'm not too sure how to comment on this because of the fact that I don't quite get the last bit, which is entirely my fault, but at the same time I didn't want to see it slip off the first page because I really do like it. I like the images and the descriptions of what is seen and I especially like the first three lines for their casual effective simplicity if that makes sense.
Thanks for the read
AR

Hi AR
Thanks for the comment, you are the reader so nothing is your fault, this is about suicide. Best TOMH

Hi again,
I've just read your comment this second and part me feels a bit daft for not getting and another part of me is so glad that I said something if anything because now I think it's excellent.
It was the note line that threw, probably because I was looking too hard. But all the other stuff I got, like the turn through 90 degrees and the juxtaposition of "my world isn't too bad".
It reminds very much of a Sylvia Plath poem in it's intent.
Good stuff.
Thanks for being tolerant, I'll get there slowly.
Best AR