05-18-2013, 08:17 PM
I liked this poem. The last line especially makes for a good ending, and I can relate to the whole "just wanting to write it all out" feeling. I stumbled on the same line as Tommy but at a different place, "because without I..." -- I read that as "because without it I..." but otherwise I thought it flowed pretty nicely 
Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for sharing!

