Stammer
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I liked this poem. The last line especially makes for a good ending, and I can relate to the whole "just wanting to write it all out" feeling. I stumbled on the same line as Tommy but at a different place, "because without I..." -- I read that as "because without it I..." but otherwise I thought it flowed pretty nicely Smile

Thanks for sharing!
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Stammer - by Catcherin - 05-17-2013, 07:35 PM
RE: Stammer - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 09:43 PM
RE: Stammer - by Glittercake - 05-18-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: Stammer - by Tommy - 05-18-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: Stammer - by tadaki - 05-18-2013, 08:17 PM



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