My last walk
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(05-18-2013, 03:51 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  I'm not too sure how to comment on this because of the fact that I don't quite get the last bit, which is entirely my fault, but at the same time I didn't want to see it slip off the first page because I really do like it. I like the images and the descriptions of what is seen and I especially like the first three lines for their casual effective simplicity if that makes sense.
Thanks for the read
AR
Hi AR
Thanks for the comment, you are the reader so nothing is your fault, this is about suicide. Best TOMH

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Messages In This Thread
My last walk - by Keith - 05-16-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 03:51 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Keith - 05-18-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 08:27 PM
RE: Out for an abseil - by billy - 05-18-2013, 08:37 PM
RE: My last walk - by Keith - 05-21-2013, 07:44 AM
RE: Out for an abseil - by Catcherin - 05-19-2013, 02:38 AM



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