05-18-2013, 03:45 AM
Hi Rowens,
One small thing about this...i felt that the last line was off in that you are telling me how good it feels, so I was thinking it should read ...I wish i could show.
The line of certain smells of summer, gets me off on a train of thoughts and smells, but then so does the soy sauce thing - so true.
AJ.
One small thing about this...i felt that the last line was off in that you are telling me how good it feels, so I was thinking it should read ...I wish i could show.
The line of certain smells of summer, gets me off on a train of thoughts and smells, but then so does the soy sauce thing - so true.
AJ.