graveyard

[Todd]

I don't think you need the first strophe at all. People come and go especially is just too overused. The rest of it though held together for me. While you flirt with ashes to ashes, dust to dust, you mix it up well enough that it doesn't stand out poorly. I also am not sure you need "death will unite" as the title graveyard actually gets you there. Beyond that, I liked it.

read whats beneath
nature for company
people come and go

earth to ashes
ashes to dust
dust to earth

all burials
put us in a place
to let others know

atheist to muslim
muslim to christian
christian to atheist

death will unite
our diffrences
will be quiet