Her
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This was quite a nice read, but it comes across as a short story not a poem. I like the slightly dreamlike quality to the description though, I think that works well, especially given the subject matter.
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Her - by Obloquy - 04-10-2013, 01:12 PM
RE: Her - by rowens - 04-11-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: Her - by AisforApple - 04-11-2013, 02:19 AM
RE: Her - by YaMarVa - 05-09-2013, 12:45 AM
RE: Her - by Ehud - 05-09-2013, 01:55 AM
RE: Her - by KICKBACK - 05-09-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Her - by Obloquy - 05-09-2013, 09:52 AM
RE: Her - by Volaticus - 05-09-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: Her - by billy - 05-15-2013, 12:25 PM
RE: Her - by GDavid - 05-16-2013, 09:20 AM
RE: Her - by Catcherin - 05-17-2013, 07:33 PM



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