Absent hearted

Absent hearted

rowens
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05-17-2013, 07:41 AM

The wording needs to be smoothed out first. All of it makes sense. But most of the lines have problems.

I might can say more, if somebody else doesn't first, when I have something to drink. For some reason my vision gets less blurry when I'm drinking. And I can concentrate better.

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Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 06:57 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:02 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:06 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:12 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:21 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:32 AM

RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:41 AM

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