05-17-2013, 07:26 AM
(05-17-2013, 05:57 AM)rowens Wrote:I am loathe to comment on crit's crit...go easy on sonata. Try to remember how you saw things when you were only ten years old.(05-17-2013, 01:06 AM)Sonata Wrote:This part really stands out as pure comedy.(05-15-2013, 04:21 PM)Pilgrim Wrote: 7. Earths and elixirs both seem to need apostrophes.
I fixed that, I actually put those but I guess some bug or something.
Best,
tectak