Absent hearted
#6
Solitude has never hurt so much before
I’ve come to love you more and more

Though still simple, those two lines work better like that. All the lines could use that sort of smoothing out.


I was lonely many times but never alone

Things start to get more complicated with the line above. About being alone with her, or is it something else you mean?

Maybe if you get to a computer, you can try to smooth things out a little more.
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Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 06:57 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:02 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:04 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:06 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by Being human - 05-17-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: Absent hearted - by rowens - 05-17-2013, 07:41 AM



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