05-17-2013, 07:12 AM
(05-17-2013, 07:06 AM)rowens Wrote: A lot of things would need to be worked on. And the dots kind of distract.Oh is it so, bummer
I'm sorry for the dots, anyways, yeah I know it's not really up to the mark according to standards people have set here, but as I said, I'd like to know just really important things that I should be working on and again this isn't for any project or anything like that just few sentences woven in an effort to show my love how I felt when she was away, just a tiny bit of effort from my side to make her smile