Her
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When one writes for him/her self only the thoughts and emotions matter. When you post for others not taking the time to proof and correct reflects on your opinion of yourself and your opinion of those you intend to read your words.
I only made it half way through your work , the ending may have been better.
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Her - by Obloquy - 04-10-2013, 01:12 PM
RE: Her - by rowens - 04-11-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: Her - by AisforApple - 04-11-2013, 02:19 AM
RE: Her - by YaMarVa - 05-09-2013, 12:45 AM
RE: Her - by Ehud - 05-09-2013, 01:55 AM
RE: Her - by KICKBACK - 05-09-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Her - by Obloquy - 05-09-2013, 09:52 AM
RE: Her - by Volaticus - 05-09-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: Her - by billy - 05-15-2013, 12:25 PM
RE: Her - by GDavid - 05-16-2013, 09:20 AM
RE: Her - by Catcherin - 05-17-2013, 07:33 PM



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