Seductress

[tectak]

There aren't many references to video games in poetry, it could be unique and there are vivid images in video games.

There aren't many references in serious poetry to video games...do not encourage les autres. You will end up with the psychotic digitally depressed writing angst poetry about dungeons and bloody dragons, and believing it is about life!
If you want to read about video games go to your nearest Toys'r'Us. If you want to write about video games...post in Novice or Fun. Hopefully, that is where they will get the most apposite crit. One man's view.(though gleaned from bitter experience over many years)
Best,
tectak