Patet exposita ad oculos…edit 1 brownlie, billy et moi

[tectak]

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No time right now and maybe not qualified enough to critique, but : the style reminds me a lot of G. M. Hopkins. ,-)
Content: reads like a parody ( mocking) of said. Enjoyed it. ;-) )

Hi serge,
Don't waste your intellect on this....read the discussion on Growth of Organic poetry.
Good to hear from you,
Best,
tectak
You may never read this. GM Hopkins festival in Dublin is a great affair. I went to it several years back and DO remember God's Grandeur as a remarkably predictive piece of work. You are amazingly well read,serge. If you read GG you will see the word "ooze". It is interesting that this verse form should throw up the use in my piece...subconsciously. Well spotted and well commented.
Best,
Tom