to be deaf

[C.M.C.]

I want to say firstly that this poem stirred up something in me. Whether it was emotion or just being trapped in thought filled trance, I'm not sure. But it works! The only complaint that I may have is that, the last stanza just feels off, being three lines with the rest four. Unless there is a specific reason or structure for it, you might want to add another line in there. Whatever you do though, don't just throw a line in there to throw a line in there. It should be thought about and flow well. Not that you would have a problem with it since the poem does very nicely.