Love & Poetry

[Tommy]

I think you should leave the first line in and then answer it in a second stanza. "I question in hope you'll answer me" kind of begs for an answer don't you think? Rowens is right, there are plenty of other things love demands, so tell us your answer. I didn't like the word "feelings." Sorry not sure why, I guess it always make me sing that awful song, whoa whoa whoooa.....