05-14-2013, 08:18 AM
Hi there i need to make a nursery rhyme for English class that is suppose to have a moral lesson or meaning. Here is my poem. Tell me if you understand it and tell me if you can finding what the moral lesson is? Also any criticisms or advice to give me thanks? And is this poem an A+ or not? How can i improve thanks!
"Pain is only temporary"
No pain, no gain is what they say.
Being tough and brave can be the right way.
Sometimes that pain may last for a day.
And you may think the only cure is just to pray.
But you must understand that pain does not last forever.
If you quit to achieve your goals however, the pain will last forever.
So when you lose, fail or fall
Don’t crawl away from failure; just stand up nice and tall.
After all you will grow up to be big and strong.
Pain is only temporary.
"Pain is only temporary"
No pain, no gain is what they say.
Being tough and brave can be the right way.
Sometimes that pain may last for a day.
And you may think the only cure is just to pray.
But you must understand that pain does not last forever.
If you quit to achieve your goals however, the pain will last forever.
So when you lose, fail or fall
Don’t crawl away from failure; just stand up nice and tall.
After all you will grow up to be big and strong.
Pain is only temporary.