My Gran cried the day he died.

[Keith]

Very good, I think you could have chosen your explanation a little more carefully "and this came out instead" Lol unintentional I'm sure ;-) anyway thought this was very funny and quirky and really liked the last Stanza, also just a point but the second stanza seemed out of place and could be removed and converted into short poem on its own as I think you have something in the hot chocolate with marsh mellow icebergs not sure what but I love the focus that this line brings best...TOMH