05-14-2013, 02:52 AM
Where was the bonnet? Can I have a refund, I was misled by the title
You need to be a bit tighter with those rhyming words, some of them don't really rhyme. If you read it out to yourself it's easier to hear where it might be going wrong.
Good effort though
You need to be a bit tighter with those rhyming words, some of them don't really rhyme. If you read it out to yourself it's easier to hear where it might be going wrong.Good effort though
wae aye man ye radgie