05-13-2013, 07:04 PM
HI.. I loved the message of this poem. I also liked the off-rhymes. I wonder about keenest earnestness though. That doesn't seem so good. Thanks.
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A pinch of innocence
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A pinch of innocence - by hyeyeonkim - 05-13-2013, 03:47 PM
RE: A pinch of innocence - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 07:04 PM
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