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So do you think its better to keep the subtlety? or should i try to be a little more explicit? I mean I want to write it as a subtle poem...but I want people to understand too. and I want to stay with the whole 'I'm on a quest' feel...

do you know any poetry about this stuff i could read? I wanna see how they bring forth sexual images...Imma go back and read Shakespeare's Venus and Adonis poem...but do you have any suggestions, before i google 'sex poetry'?

i'm just saying there's a HUGE size difference tho Tongue
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...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-09-2013, 12:21 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Obloquy - 05-10-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: ...Untitled... - by billy - 08-24-2013, 05:24 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Labyrinth - 05-11-2013, 11:17 AM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Volaticus - 05-11-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-11-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by lmh - 05-11-2013, 11:03 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-13-2013, 04:38 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by billy - 05-13-2013, 04:50 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-13-2013, 05:12 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by billy - 05-13-2013, 05:17 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-13-2013, 05:31 PM
RE: ...Untitled... - by billy - 05-13-2013, 05:57 PM



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