05-13-2013, 12:51 PM
Hey another thing i noticed when reading it again was this line:
"dampening grounds with tongues that spread"
the grounds part is plural...i'm not an English major or anything...so i'm not really sure...but grounds doesn't seem right to me. Maybe something like 'dampens the ground'. I think the article here brings a more defined feel to the word...anyway its jmho..
"dampening grounds with tongues that spread"
the grounds part is plural...i'm not an English major or anything...so i'm not really sure...but grounds doesn't seem right to me. Maybe something like 'dampens the ground'. I think the article here brings a more defined feel to the word...anyway its jmho..