Ghost in the Machine (edit)
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I actually did that purposely ( the subject and verbs not agreeing). At first it was just for a certain tone for the poem, but now i'm gearing for it to have an impact near the end, this isn't really finished yet.
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Ghost in the Machine (edit) - by James - 05-11-2013, 12:16 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by dusboss - 05-11-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by jkaram - 05-11-2013, 07:42 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-12-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by James - 05-12-2013, 12:56 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 06:14 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by James - 05-13-2013, 10:58 AM



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