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05-13-2013, 02:34 AM
Like cidermaid and billy, I also think you have done an excellent job, it really sharpens the images. Love the 'concrete jungle'. When used in this poem, I think it combines the nature and the man-made, in a way that fits the poem very well. Hope that made sense, my English is really letting me down today
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(1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-11-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: stars, moon, sun - by cidermaid - 05-12-2013, 03:57 AM
RE: stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-12-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: stars, moon, sun - by Heartafire - 05-12-2013, 04:38 AM
RE: stars, moon, sun - by Volaticus - 05-12-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-12-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-12-2013, 07:23 PM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by billy - 05-12-2013, 07:51 PM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-12-2013, 08:31 PM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by cidermaid - 05-12-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by Volaticus - 05-13-2013, 02:34 AM
RE: (1st edit) stars, moon, sun - by Magpie - 05-13-2013, 09:54 AM
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