05-12-2013, 02:00 PM
I really like what you've written here, this could be a preference thing but one negative thing I can point out is when you rhyme about with about. Not that its wrong I guess I just prefer verity.
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RE: Hubris at Sea - by lmh - 05-12-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: Hubris at Sea - by James - 05-12-2013, 01:31 AM
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RE: Hubris at Sea - by billy - 05-19-2013, 12:23 PM
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