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In Death
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05-12-2013, 11:52 AM
Hi allykat, I think the edit is A LOT better than the original, which is saying something. But I'm not quite sure what you mean from "Eyes open and shut and radiate red" and then onward throughout the rest. I may be an idiot and completely be missing the point, but could you explain?
"Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again." - C.S. Lewis
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In Death - by allykat727 - 05-12-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: In Death - by C.M.C. - 05-12-2013, 11:52 AM
RE: In Death - by Zerric - 05-12-2013, 12:45 PM
RE: In Death - by allykat727 - 05-13-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: In Death - by billy - 05-12-2013, 01:40 PM
RE: In Death - by Zerric - 05-13-2013, 12:51 PM
RE: In Death - by allykat727 - 05-13-2013, 07:58 PM
RE: In Death - by Samuel.K123 - 05-13-2013, 07:54 PM
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