(1st edit) stars, moon, sun

[Magpie]

In the clear night sky
I got lost whilst wandering
between the stars.

A star that appeared
from behind clouds; grew brighter
and became the Moon.

Even the city...
breathing, majestic, alive,
glowing at sunset.

Hi AR,
I really like these three as a whole piece. Some things could be changed a little, but I see that you've already got comments on that, so I'll just stick to what I like.
The first one I absolutely loved. It makes a strong image, that I can picture clearly. I also like it because can relate to it so much, with the stars completely consuming you.
The second one is also a very good picture. I think it connects well to the first one.
And another beautiful picture in the third. Also a sight I have enjoyed many times.
They made my mind completely wander outside to those scenes for a moment. Thanks.
All my best,
LB

Hi Volaticus,
Thanks for the kind comments, I'm going to edit these I just need to give it a bit more thought first.
I always seem to get lost in the stars when I see them and then I bought a telescope, but that's a whole other story, for a while I was Galileo
Thanks again for the kind words.
AR