(1st edit) stars, moon, sun

[cidermaid]

Hi Ambrosial,
read these several times now and overall like the connection that flows between them.
A couple of thoughts on each below. Whilst I feel / agree with the need (well my need ) to keep to the 575 syllable count..of traditional Haiku (I know- these are senyru) ...I can abondoned this for my comments on yours!

In the clear night sky could be shortened to A clear night sky.
I got lost whilst wandering
between the stars. Nice cameo of star gazing .

A star that appeared Do you need "that"
from behind clouds; grew brighter
and became the Moon. This one might beifit a bit of work - not sure what it adds to the overall picture. Also I'm mentally fighting against the moon is a star thing

Even the city... Love this one but would perfer it without the "even" preface.
breathing, majestic, alive,
glowing at sunset.

Almost think that the read would be solid enough without the middle stanza, but will watch with intreast to see where you take this.

thanks for the read
AJ.