Poetry

[Ferwynne]

Thanks so much for the feedback. I can see where changing "as" to "or" in line 3 would help clarify the differences, however this poem was intentionally written without (help me find the words here) phrases such as "it is" or "also", in order to convey a sense of free-writing style.

Luckily, this one's already submitted so I can be free of it for a while. Thanks!

Fer