Hubris at Sea

[lmh]

I actually don't Brownlie, I was on the beach and the sky was ominous and I wrote it, I didn't take into a account format but thank you for your feedback. It is always great to learn and know more, I'm sure I'll try tightening this up with iambic or try it on something else. It's great to hear this reminds you of Greek drama, I love them and their tone. The unwillingness to accept one's fate always struck me as brutal, tragic and beautiful. Their is just something about being peacefully doomed. this is a bit of "Rendezvous with Death" by Alan Seeger http://www.bartleby.com/104/121.html and "The Perfect Storm"(movie) http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0177971/
Thanks for everything