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Ghost in the Machine (edit)
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05-11-2013, 07:42 PM
A couple of your lines in your poem resonated in me. I particularly love "hole in the spirit of the climb" and "may ghost make mist"- what feeling! I became lost in wistful feelings in the darkness. My only slight criticim is that I wished in certain lines for some paring of words to make the gems of this poem shine a little brighter.
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Ghost in the Machine (edit) - by James - 05-11-2013, 12:16 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by dusboss - 05-11-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by jkaram - 05-11-2013, 07:42 PM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-12-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by James - 05-12-2013, 12:56 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 06:14 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Ghost in the Machine - by James - 05-13-2013, 10:58 AM
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