Ghost in the Machine (edit)

[dusboss]

I really like first lines, they make me think of cliffs in Scotland and it's nature, and then from the moment you start mentioning monsters I start picturing cliffs and villages with beings from mythology. All in all I think of this poem as if it is placed in past, middle age, which I really adore. This is maybe the first poem that I read and liked from the start till the end, very impressive writing.
All the best and keep writing.