untitled haibun.
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hi aj, haibun is enough as it incorporates the haiku

i enjoyed the the way the storm was measured and the way the haiku tied into the prose. i'm struggling to see the seasonal word but i'm sure bread, well, or specially, wine, could be used. (wine grapes are picked in a certain season)

to play the brevity of the haiku off the lengthy prose. i wonder if standing oaks would stand up in it's own right.
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untitled haibun. - by cidermaid - 05-11-2013, 05:19 PM
RE: untitled haibun & haiku - by billy - 05-11-2013, 06:03 PM
RE: untitled haibun & haiku - by cidermaid - 05-12-2013, 03:30 AM
RE: untitled haibun. - by Magpie - 05-12-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: untitled haibun. - by cidermaid - 05-12-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: untitled haibun. - by billy - 05-12-2013, 07:04 PM
RE: untitled haibun. - by Keith - 05-14-2013, 06:03 AM
RE: untitled haibun. - by heslopian - 05-18-2013, 11:52 PM
RE: untitled haibun. - by Brownlie - 05-19-2013, 12:43 AM
RE: untitled haibun. - by cidermaid - 05-19-2013, 01:02 AM



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