05-11-2013, 06:29 AM
You have solid poem here that could use a tidy and would stand up in one of the workshops forums. not sure why its in fun ?
The harbinger of death is very symbolic given the arrival of boots outside gramps window and the poem is atmospheric enough for the reader to sense the tension. Thanks S
The harbinger of death is very symbolic given the arrival of boots outside gramps window and the poem is atmospheric enough for the reader to sense the tension. Thanks S
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