Maceration [revision 1]

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Maceration [revision 1]

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05-10-2013, 01:27 PM

True, it's not about Andrew, nor a Tsunami. I hope that's clearer with the revision.

Tectak, I attempted some metric constraint, even a bit of rhyme. I haven't decided which version I prefer.

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Maceration [revision 1] - by syntheticsunset - 05-08-2013, 11:17 AM

RE: Maceration - by milo - 05-08-2013, 11:50 AM

RE: Maceration - by billy - 05-08-2013, 07:33 PM

RE: Maceration - by syntheticsunset - 05-09-2013, 10:44 AM

RE: Maceration - by tectak - 05-08-2013, 11:29 PM

RE: Maceration [revision 1] - by syntheticsunset - 05-10-2013, 01:27 PM

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