Seagulls....(edited)

[Magpie]

I definitely got a kick out of this. Problems of us fortunate people that get to live near the ocean.

They've got evil eyes- That is perfect, I think that all the time.

The capitol Crow and Hawk thing went right over my head reading it but that is very clever.

Good stuff.
My dog feels the same way we do and still is pretty sure she'll catch one of them damn seagulls some day.

Thanks for the comments skysk8er21, much appreciated.
I am in the process of editing this, especially the end, to turn it into more of a comedy poem all the way through, Because this version I feel ended weakly and without much purpose, so hopefully the next version will improve it. Just read your poem about cliche and I like your sense of humour.
Thanks AR