05-10-2013, 06:10 AM
Hi Cidermaid, thank you so much for stopping here. I like your suggestions and plan to make some edits accordingly. Your ideas
are winners!
my best
Heart
Days roll by, one into another.
Waves of melancholy.
Her lust for life's intensity is fading,
petals closing in the dark.
Past rustling curtains dandelions flee,
their parachutes carried by the wind,
escaping her sadness, a blanket of despair
they travel to their destiny.
Beyond dusty panes,
reflections of a woman,
lost in reverie.
Her chafed hands fill their mission,
blooms of red and gold.
She listens for the thunder.
Waiting for the lightning
to waken a lifeless world
are winners!
my best
Heart
Days roll by, one into another.
Waves of melancholy.
Her lust for life's intensity is fading,
petals closing in the dark.
Past rustling curtains dandelions flee,
their parachutes carried by the wind,
escaping her sadness, a blanket of despair
they travel to their destiny.
Beyond dusty panes,
reflections of a woman,
lost in reverie.
Her chafed hands fill their mission,
blooms of red and gold.
She listens for the thunder.
Waiting for the lightning
to waken a lifeless world