05-10-2013, 04:30 AM
I have a question now. How do you feel about yourself, after having written all that down?
I love the imagery. The descriptions are well written, that I can almost feel what it's like to be inside the girl's head. How she thinks and feels.
It wasn't just us that this poem was made for. I'd like to think it was created specifically for yourself. In a way you saw what you had not become and at the end of the poem you realize it doesn't quite matter what you didn't become, because you finally realized that you are yourself, and you are, which can go without saying, perfect.
I love the imagery. The descriptions are well written, that I can almost feel what it's like to be inside the girl's head. How she thinks and feels.
It wasn't just us that this poem was made for. I'd like to think it was created specifically for yourself. In a way you saw what you had not become and at the end of the poem you realize it doesn't quite matter what you didn't become, because you finally realized that you are yourself, and you are, which can go without saying, perfect.