Feral Cat

[Volaticus]

Matted, muddy tufts
Eyes piercing glass
I set my door ajar

This is only my fourth haiku. I'd love to know what you think, good or bad.

Hi Volaticus,
I didn't expect a haiku so soon. I like this one, especially the first line with the alliteration, the second line also is a strong image. I'm not so sure about the last line but I'll need to read it a few more times, I think it's the word ajar but I can definitely see the direction and as a whole it makes sense.
One more thing... I read elsewhere on this site that it is considered old fashioned to start each line with a capital unless it is a word like 'I'. Until I read that I did start each line with a capital, but have since stopped. It would interesting to hear other peoples opinion.
Thanks for the read, for only your fourth haiku it is very good indeed.
All the best.
AR

Hi AR,
And I didn't expect feedback on this so soon. It's nice to be surprised
And thanks for your comments, as always much appreciated.
I'm a bit of a sucker for alliterations, so I'm glad you liked L1.
I also think L3 is the weakest. I know the perfect expression in Danish, but unfortunately it didn't translate well into English. I'm all open ears to suggestions regarding the last line.
Yeah, I have also read that. I also used to start all my lines with a capital letter, but since I read it, I try not to do it in my longer poems. In most shorter poems, I think both capital and non-capital letters works quite well.
Thanks, and all the best,
- LB