05-10-2013, 01:16 AM
I agree on the 'the's. I like it very much as a whole, but my favorite got to be the third.
'Long before sunrise
through a window in the clouds,
the turquoise twilight.'
I've admired that picture in real so many times, and just dreamed myself flying out of the window.
Beautiful.
'Long before sunrise
through a window in the clouds,
the turquoise twilight.'
I've admired that picture in real so many times, and just dreamed myself flying out of the window.
Beautiful.