I suck at poetry

[billy]

actually it's not to bad, the thing is it's too obviously not to bad, it uses an extended metaphor, it breaks all rules (almost) that a sucky poet probably wouldn't know of though it lacks cliche, repetition and bad rhymes
not bad, a clever write done just a little too right.

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Constipated, my mind puckers its hemroided orifice dribbling out pebbley insubstantialities. Bloody words fall to the floor piling into an obscene heap. A retched stench fills my nostrils as I consume the excreted words, willing my body to encase them again. To reprocess them to a purer pile of shit.