05-09-2013, 10:35 AM
I like it when I poem can be fairly long, and keep me interested. I enjoyed your wording in several places, "Words like rocks/shatter glass/break me/smash mirrors/ripping pictures of my forced smile/surrounded by friends and family/into shreds." Especially. And then "But words spill onto paper for the first time, to speak my truths and to break my silences" That feels like you're talking about this very piece, and the epic feel it has too it makes me think this is either your very first, or the first one you're really proud of. I liked it a lot, give us moar!