the mission (revised)

[Keith]

S1 places the reader looking down at the woman below through a rain streaked window this all works for me but the dust seem out of place with breeze

S2 well balanced and sharp images very much enjoyed.

S3 closes the poem and make the heart drop a little, so all is good Sound of silence, I'm not sure about I would look for something other than sound. Hope this helps best... TOMH

Through the rustling curtains
a damp breeze fills the room.
Beyond the dusty panes
the reflection of a woman
weeding her flower bed in the rain.

Undaunted by the cold
chafed hands attend her mission,
resolutely caring for the
blooms of red and gold.

She listens for thunder
to break the sound of silence,
a flash of lightning
to waken her lifeless world.