05-09-2013, 07:41 AM
Hi KICKBACK,
I like the idea of this poem, there's an interesting concept in there.
I see that this is the first poem you have posted, I've been waiting for you to post a poem since you commented on my Seagulls poem, thanks for the comments, there's a new version coming soon.
Don't be afraid to post stuff on the forums where people will give more critical analysis, which you'll find more helpful.
You've definitely got the idea there, which is half the battle, finding some unusual angle to look at something in an original way. And the rest will come with time.
Look forward to reading more of your stuff soon.
Thanks
AR
I like the idea of this poem, there's an interesting concept in there.
I see that this is the first poem you have posted, I've been waiting for you to post a poem since you commented on my Seagulls poem, thanks for the comments, there's a new version coming soon.
Don't be afraid to post stuff on the forums where people will give more critical analysis, which you'll find more helpful.
You've definitely got the idea there, which is half the battle, finding some unusual angle to look at something in an original way. And the rest will come with time.
Look forward to reading more of your stuff soon.
Thanks
AR
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