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Maceration [revision 1]
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05-09-2013, 05:54 AM
(05-08-2013, 02:13 PM)syntheticsunset Wrote: Milo, do you mean that the diction has a negative impact on the meter in these spots?not meter, sound. Awoke is silly when woke works just fine and sounds better. Clung just sounds ugly to me there and it is tough to explain sonically. It also reads weird "we clung on" . .. just awkward. |
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Maceration [revision 1] - by syntheticsunset - 05-08-2013, 11:17 AM
RE: Maceration - by milo - 05-08-2013, 11:50 AM
RE: Maceration - by billy - 05-08-2013, 07:33 PM
RE: Maceration - by syntheticsunset - 05-09-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: Maceration - by tectak - 05-08-2013, 11:29 PM
RE: Maceration [revision 1] - by syntheticsunset - 05-10-2013, 01:27 PM
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