Little Dancers

Little Dancers

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#11

05-08-2013, 10:26 AM

Overall, I liked the poem. Most of the words fit together nicely and supported the dancing theme. The only word that caught me off guard was "migrating" in the first stanza due to the fact that it reminded me of animals. But again, overall, I thought it was thoughtful.

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Little Dancers - by knicodemus3 - 05-05-2013, 12:39 PM

RE: Little Dancers - by Magpie - 05-05-2013, 04:14 PM

RE: Little Dancers - by knicodemus3 - 05-06-2013, 10:37 PM

RE: Little Dancers - by Volaticus - 05-06-2013, 09:11 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by YaMarVa - 05-06-2013, 11:11 PM

RE: Little Dancers - by knicodemus3 - 05-07-2013, 07:16 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by Volaticus - 05-07-2013, 07:50 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by knicodemus3 - 05-07-2013, 10:59 PM

RE: Little Dancers - by Volaticus - 05-08-2013, 06:02 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by thatguyfromacrossthestreet - 05-07-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by Sam33lynn - 05-08-2013, 10:26 AM

RE: Little Dancers - by heslopian - 05-08-2013, 03:46 PM

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