05-08-2013, 09:10 AM
Hi Heart,
I like this poem very much. Only eight lines, and still much is expressed.
The image in first two lines was beautifully conveyed, and I felt the sentiment of the poem right away.
Also, I liked the alliterations. Especially L4, creating in itself, a sense of ticking.
Thanks for the read
I like this poem very much. Only eight lines, and still much is expressed.
The image in first two lines was beautifully conveyed, and I felt the sentiment of the poem right away.
Also, I liked the alliterations. Especially L4, creating in itself, a sense of ticking.
Thanks for the read