05-08-2013, 06:51 AM
Relentlessly the words beat upon my brain.
Where do you think words come from?
Empty; useless; limp; annoying
This is very repeditive and predictable. It reminds me of children's songs: "The wheels on the bus go round and round...."
If the person speaking doesn't want it then why are they so "lonely...lonely; lonely" ?
If you are just dead set on this form perhaps you could at least swap out the two extra lonelys for something else.
Where do you think words come from?
Empty; useless; limp; annoying
This is very repeditive and predictable. It reminds me of children's songs: "The wheels on the bus go round and round...."
If the person speaking doesn't want it then why are they so "lonely...lonely; lonely" ?
If you are just dead set on this form perhaps you could at least swap out the two extra lonelys for something else.